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Characters: Weather Time of day
Sub Zero Storm Night time
Raiden
Kenshi
The biggest fight ever!
One storming night, there was two people fighting. There names were Sub - Zero, Kenshi and Raiden. Sub Zero’s power was ice and Raiden’s power was thunder. Kenshi does not have any power but he uses a sword. Sub Zero and Kenshi was fighting because they were trying to see who is the strongest and Raiden was trying to stop the fight. Sub Zero iced Raiden and Raiden used his thunder to break the ice.
Next Kenshi ran to Sub Zero to slice him up. Sub Zero froze him and he sliced him out of the ice. Then Raiden shocked Sub Zero and Kenshi and they felt like they were shook by a lighting. Then Sub Zero made a ice sword and tried to fight against Kenshi. However, Kenshi broke Sub Zero swords and then Raiden said,” Stop fighting.” Raiden use his power to try and stop them two from fighting.
Then Sub zero used his power to put a big ice cube onto the top of Kenshi head. However, Kenshi stepped back and saw the ice fall in front of him. Next Raiden called Scorpion to come and scare Sub Zero because Sub Zero and Scorpion are arch enemies. When Scorpion arrived, Sub Zero ran away and Kenshi said, “Sub Zero is a scared cat.” Next Scorpion went back home and Sub Zero killed Kenshi from back with his dagger. Then Raiden got angry and they both started to fight. However, that is another story for another day.
Who would win. Sub Zero or Raiden
Well done Cameron, the flow of your work keeps me motivated to keep reading. This is an important writing skill.
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