Mysterious Ninja in the city!

Planning:

Ninja:                            Type of weapons:         Weather:          Time of day

In Black                         Shuriken                          Fine                Afternoon

                                     Katana

Mysterious Ninja in the city                                     

One afternoon, a criminal stole a old lady's purse. Suddenly a person in black who whoosh from the sky and threw his Shuriken and it hit the man with the purse and he was hanging because the Shuriken was hanging his arms up on the brick wall. Then he whoosh and gave the old lady her purse back. The cops arrived and arrested the thief while the ninja watch. Next the ninja went back to his secret hideout which was in a fancy house.

While he was in his fancy house, he put back his Shuriken and then he went to his lounge to watch some T.V. He watch the news and he saw that there were 2 criminals. They were robbing the bank and they almost stole 1,000 dollars. So the ninja got up and went and grab his Katana and went into to the day time. Once the criminal was out the ninja came like a shadow and they both meet up.

Once they he got up front with the criminal. He use all his karate moves and he also uses his Katana. He was fighting the criminal because the criminal was using pistol guns. The ninja went side by side and killed both of the criminal using his Katana. He whoosh out of sight and went back home and have to store his weapons. When he left, he had to threw the money back into the safe so it can be safe from criminals.

Will you know this Mysterious Ninja in the city...

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