Hi my name is Luke from Grey Main School.This is a cool classroom. Do you actually think this class room is cool? What was the best part about this? I like the outdoor play one.
Ki Ora my name is Oliver I am form grey main school in mamaku hub. I really really like what you have been doing this week. The thing that I like the most is how you put a pitcher in but maybe next time you should add more information at the top.
Hey Cameron, my name is Phoenix from St Patrick's school too. I really like your poem it was very cool! But maybe next time you could try and make your poem longer instead of just school, maybe you could say school is cool like your heading. Well Done!:)
Ki Ora Cameron it's me Mark from St Patrick's school in Greymouth. I am here to give you feedback about your acrostic poem. I like the way you did it about the word school and how you decorated it and there is nothing wrong with it and I really like doing acrostic poems and not that long ago I did one on the environment and maybe you should go and check it in your own time thanks.
Hi my name is Luke from Grey Main School.This is a cool classroom. Do you actually think this class room is cool? What was the best part about this? I like the outdoor play one.
ReplyDeleteKi Ora my name is Oliver I am form grey main school in mamaku hub. I really really like what you have been doing this week. The thing that I like the most is how you put a pitcher in but maybe next time you should add more information at the top.
ReplyDeleteHi Oliver, thank you so much for looking at my work and I couldn't add any information because its a acrostic.
DeleteHey Cameron, my name is Phoenix from St Patrick's school too.
ReplyDeleteI really like your poem it was very cool! But maybe next time you could try and make your poem longer instead of just school, maybe you could say school is cool like your heading.
Well Done!:)
Hello my name is Antonio from St Patricks school.I love how you put good words and colour, maybe next time you should put more pictures .
ReplyDeleteKi Ora Cameron it's me Mark from St Patrick's school in Greymouth. I am here to give you feedback about your acrostic poem. I like the way you did it about the word school and how you decorated it and there is nothing wrong with it and I really like doing acrostic
ReplyDeletepoems and not that long ago I did one on the environment and maybe you should go and check it in your own time thanks.