Stop playing video games now!

Stop children from playing video games.

Playing sports is better for your fitness and you will be healthy because playing video games does nothing to your fitness. Buying games with money is a waste of money because money could be used for food, clothes, school bills and needs for them. 

Playing video games can waste a lot of power because the power bills could be very high and hard to pay all of them. When they play video games, they are not paying attention to anything else. They will offend some people or parents from playing video game because they are not listening to them and not doing what they are asked to do.

Children should stop playing video game because they will waste money, waste power, will offend people and should play more sports for there fitness.

We are learning to understand and use the structure of persuasive writing. 
I know this when I write my point of view followed by my arguments and evidence for why children shouldn't play video games.